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Post by Littlestone on Jul 28, 2007 16:03:08 GMT -5
Name: Littlestone Gender: Female Age: 14 dog Years (2 in human years) Appearance: History: Her closest family was killed by wolverines which are known as monsters,demons. She was able to get away just in time and she survived every attack that she had gotten. A few days passed and you couldn't see her scars. Today she looks for a home and a place just for wolves. She has also been attacked by many animals,walruses,bears,and mean wolves. She believes that only those who souls are pure will make it to the home for wolves Personalty: Friendly,Kind,is good but not very good
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Post by Bluewolf on Jul 28, 2007 16:17:04 GMT -5
Nice but you:
A. Need to describe your chars build, colours, eye colour etc. Maybe axe that purple eyebrow
B. Really Extend her history.
C. Really extend her personalty.
No offence but this is really lacking.
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Post by Blahwolf on Jul 28, 2007 21:03:23 GMT -5
Blue's right, Littlestone. While a picture is a nice addition to an app, it doesn't really help us get a feel for your character. I would suggest taking a look at some of the previously posted apps done by others in the Approved Characters section. They should help you get an idea of what we're looking for.
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Post by Snowmuzzle on Aug 22, 2007 6:52:56 GMT -5
Hi LT. Don't be put off. Keep going-- it does need more but if you have trouble just ask any of us to help. *cough* I sometimes help Blue with his Apps *cough*
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